It is definatly a bath room.!
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Bath romm is the most important room in my house.
It should be clean because we start our day with bathroom, of course we finish our day with bath room.
If bathroom is dirthy, we don't want to use it. that is not good for our health.
So we have to keep clean our bath room in first priority.
That's why bath room is the most important room.
If we have an erruption or collapsion, it is better to go bathroom.
because water can be provided from bathroom.
Since we use water every single moment in bathroom which is made thightly and compactly, It's density and strength are better than any other space.
Bathroom is related with sanitation, so we don't want to share it with other people If they are not close with us.
In these days, we often go to camp.
In this case, we have to choose where we sleep and stay, the most powerful factor of choosing accomodation is depand on how clean bathroom is.
강사 첨삭
Good evening! How are you?
I hope that you will have a great time tomorrow.
You are right, bathroom is the most important place in our house.
I totally agree with you. We should always keep it clean.
My mom and grandmother told me that a person\'s attitude and character reflects on how clean the bathroom is.
Have a great night.
Teacher Nina
>> Bathroom is the most important room in my house.
It should be clean because we start our day with bathroom, of course we finish our day with bath room.
It should be clean because we start our day with bathroom, of course we finish our day with bath room.
>> It should be clean because we start our day by using the bathroom. Of course, we also end it by doing the same thing.
If bathroom is dirthy, we don\'t want to use it. that is not good for our health.
If bathroom is dirthy, we don\'t want to use it. that is not good for our health.
>> If the bathroom is dirty, we don\'t want to use it. And also it is not good for our health.
So we have to keep clean our bath room in first priority.
So we have to keep clean our bath room in first priority.
>> So we have to keep it clean.
>> OR: So we have to always keep it clean.
That\'s why bath room is the most important room.
That\'s why bath room is the most important room.
>> That\'s why bathroom is the most important.
If we have an erruption or collapsion, it is better to go bathroom.
If we have an erruption or collapsion, it is better to go bathroom.
>> If there will be an earthquake, it is better to go to the bathroom.
because water can be provided from bathroom.
because water can be provided from bathroom.
>> Because we can get water from there.
>> OR: Because it has water.
Since we use water every single moment in bathroom which is made thightly and compactly, It\'s density and strength are better than any other space.
>> OR: Because it has water.
Since we use water every single moment in bathroom which is made thightly and compactly, It\'s density and strength are better than any other space.
>> Since we use water every single moment, its density and strength is better than anything.
Bathroom is related with sanitation, so we don\'t want to share it with other people If they are not close with us.
Bathroom is related with sanitation, so we don\'t want to share it with other people If they are not close with us.
>> Bathroom is related with sanitation, so we don\'t want to share it with other people if they are not close to us.
In these days, we often go to camp.
In these days, we often go to camp.
>> These days, we often go camping.
In this case, we have to choose where we sleep and stay, the most powerful factor of choosing accomodation is depand on how clean bathroom is.
In this case, we have to choose where we sleep and stay, the most powerful factor of choosing accomodation is depand on how clean bathroom is.
>> In this case, we have to choose where to sleep and stay. The most powerful factor of choosing an accommodation depends on how clean the bathroom is.
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