It is different to spend a free time between the man and the woman
학생이 쓴 원문
Most men spend their time to play sports ,like soccer or tennis, or play games.
Whereas, most women spend their time to talk about somting with their friends.
But some of men like to talk with their friends and some of women like to play sports.
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Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
Whereas, most women spend their time to talk about somting with their friends.
But some of men like to talk with their friends and some of women like to play sports.
Most men spend their time to play sports ,like soccer or tennis, or play games.
>>Most men spend their time playing sports ,like soccer or tennis, or play games.
>>Whereas, most women spend their time talking about something with their friends.
But some of men like to talk with their friends and some of women like to play sports.
>>But some men like talking with their friends and some women would like to play sports.
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