it is difficult.

2014-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Once I was interest in psychology academically, because It is easy and seems like I have a glasses which make me see others mind. But Being a psychologist is very hard. I think he/she have to listen others worries. Maybe they also should give them an advise too. living one's life is very hard, of course it is very hard to give an advise to others life. Sometimes they want to talk with other people but that is their job. Hobby is enjoyable thing, However when It became a job, It will be not enjoyable.

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Hello there [이름]! Thank you very much for making me happy tonight. You did a good job wtih your composition! Keep it up! I advice you to be mindful of your word order. Once you interchanged some of the words, the meaning will be different. I really wanted to be a Psychologist, but I wasn\'t able to do it because of my parents. Can you tell me more about your ideas in class? Talk to you tomorrow. Good night! See you! Teacher Nina   Once I was interest in psychology academically, >> I was once interested in Psychology. >> OR: I became interested academically in Psychology once. because It is easy and seems like I have a glasses which make me see others mind. >> It is because it\'s easy and it seems like I have glasses, which makes me read other people\'s mind. But Being a psychologist is very hard. >> Correct! (Check: Capitalization of the word Psychologist ^^ ) I think he/she have to listen others worries. >> I think he/ she has to listen to other people\'s worries. Maybe they also should give them an advise too. >> Correct!living one\'s life is very hard, of course it is very hard to give an advise to others life. >> Did you mean: Living a life and giving an advise to other people\'s life is very hard. Sometimes they want to talk with other people but that is their job.>> Did you mean: Sometimes, they want to talk to other people and that is a part of their job. >> OR: Sometimes, they don\'t want to talk to other people but it\'s their job. Hobby is enjoyable thing, However when It became a job, It will be not enjoyable. >> Having it as your hobby is an enjoyable thing, but once it became a part of your job you wil hate it. >> OR: If it is one of your hobbym it is an enjoyale thing. But once it became your job, you\'re going to dislike it.

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