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2014-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1) Emily: "Our teacher will go to Leipzig tomorrow." Emily said that our teacher would go to Leipzig the day. 2) Helen: "I was writing a letter yesterday." Helen told me that she had been writing a letter the day before. 3) Robert: "My father flew to Dallas last year." Robert told me that his father had flown to Dallas the year before. 4) Lisa: "Tim went to the stadium an hour ago." Lisa said that Tim had gone to the stadium an hour ago. 5) Patricia: "My mother will celebrate her birthday next weekend." Patricia said that his mother would celebrate her birthday the weekend. last Friday, I didn't remember very much. but I thought that I was bit busy. Carolyn had to stay at work until she finish her task. She wanted to buy some side dishes so that I took her to the market. we enjoyed the shopping, buying beer and sidedishes. After that, I took our class in the car. andthen we ordered chiken. there are many chiken brands in korea. the flavor of chiken is various

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Good evening [이름]!Wow! Thanks for doing your homework April of last year. Hahaha!I am so happy that you always find time to submit your homework on weekedays. I suggest that in order for you not to cram, you can do it on weekends if you like. =) It is because I know that you are really busy from Mondays to Fridays. ^^ Keep up the good work. Take Care! Teacher Nina   1) Emily: \"Our teacher will go to Leipzig tomorrow.\"Emily said that our teacher would go to Leipzig the day. >> Emily said that their teacher would go to Leipzig the next day. 2) Helen: \"I was writing a letter yesterday.\"Helen told me that she had been writing a letter the day before. >> Correct! 3) Robert: \"My father flew to Dallas last year.\"Robert told me that his father had flown to Dallas the year before. >> Correct! 4) Lisa: \"Tim went to the stadium an hour ago.\"Lisa said that Tim had gone to the stadium an hour ago. >> Correct! 5) Patricia: \"My mother will celebrate her birthday next weekend.\"Patricia said that his mother would celebrate her birthday the weekend. >> Patricia said that her mother would celebrate her birthday the following weekend.last Friday, I didn\'t remember very much. >> Did you mean: I wasn\'t able to remember anything that happened last Friday. but I thought that I was bit busy. >> I think I was a bit busy that day. Carolyn had to stay at work until she finish her task. >> Correct! She wanted to buy some side dishes so that I took her to the market. >> Correct! we enjoyed the shopping, buying beer and sidedishes. >> We enjoyed shopping, buying beer and side dishes. After that, I took our class in the car. >> Correct! andthen we ordered chiken. >> Correct! ( Proper spacing ^^) there are many chiken brands in korea. the flavor of chiken is various >> Did you mean:  There are many chicken dishes in Korea, the flavors are different from each other.

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