It is difficult to be a real friend.
학생이 쓴 원문
A real friend is one who walks in when the rest of the world walks out.
It is difficult to be a real friend.
If he is a real friend and becomes a murder by accident,
can we hide him?
When I am gloomy, he makes me cheerful.
When I become a beggar, he can helps me.
But when I become a murder by accident, can he hides me?
The answer is "No".
In that case,
first of all, I will persuade him to surrender by himself.
If he don't surrender, I will inform the police.
And then I will go to the prison and soothe him.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Real friends are those who pushes you to do the right thing. And according to your composition here, you are indeed a good friend. We can’t let our friends walk on the dark side, we have to show them the light and help them become a better person even if it means that they have to get hurt and go through painful experiences. Sometimes that’s the only way to make them stronger..
Good job on your composition here [이름]. Just be more careful with the subject-verb agreement..
See you in class!
T. Shy
If he is a real friend and becomes a murder by accident,>> If he is a real friend and becomes a murderer by accident,
When I become a beggar, he can helps me.>> When I become a beggar, he can help me.
But when I become a murder by accident, can he hides me?>> But when I become a murderer by accident, can he hide me?
If he don't surrender, I will inform the police.>> If he doesn't surrender, I will inform the police.
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