It is going to be busy on this weekends

2010-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 tim

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Today's topic is about this weekends'plan. On saturday, there is a wedding party of my freind.she is one of the high school friends.After the friend's wedding, I will meet a friend who I met in China last year. Actually I have been to China last year for husband's work.At that time, I met her. She was my Chinese teacher.And luckily we become to friends. And this winter she is in Korea.So we can meet again.^^I'm looking foward to meet the friend.^^ On Sunday, I will also meet My University friends.This year we are 30 age.(in Korean age) So this meeting is going to be conglatuation party for being 30 age and also anniversary for our friendship for 10 years.^^ It will be really a busy weekends. So, today I have to go my mother's house. She will take care of my son. Thanks,mom.^^

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