It is good for many things, but it is difficult.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was a young I learned how to ride a bike. So I know the way to ride a bike. Although I know there
are advantages that riding a bike can make me be healthy, protect the earth environments, make my stress out etc, It is very difficult for me to ride a bike everyday to go to work. It takes a long time to get to work and I might be exhausted before getting to work.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju [이름]. Good job with the homework. I see the effort you have put into it and I appreciate it very much. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the subject. I hope you have a great weekend. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
It is good for many things, but it is difficult.
>> CORRECT =)
When I was a young I learned how to ride a bike.
>> When I was young, I learned how to ride a bike.
So I know the way to ride a bike.
>> CORRECT =)
>> OR: So I know how to ride a bike.
Although I know there are advantages that riding a bike can make me be healthy, protect the earth environments, make my stress out etc,
>> Although I know there are advantages to riding a bike like it can make me healthy, protect the environment, relieve my stress, etc.
It is very difficult for me to ride a bike everyday to go to work.
>> It is very difficult for me to ride a bike every day to work.
It takes a long time to get to work and I might be exhausted before getting to work.
>> CORRECT =)
It is good for many things, but it is difficult.
>> CORRECT =)
When I was a young I learned how to ride a bike.
>> When I was young, I learned how to ride a bike.
So I know the way to ride a bike.
>> CORRECT =)
>> OR: So I know how to ride a bike.
Although I know there are advantages that riding a bike can make me be healthy, protect the earth environments, make my stress out etc,
>> Although I know there are advantages to riding a bike like it can make me healthy, protect the environment, relieve my stress, etc.
It is very difficult for me to ride a bike everyday to go to work.
>> It is very difficult for me to ride a bike every day to work.
It takes a long time to get to work and I might be exhausted before getting to work.
>> CORRECT =)
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