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2012-05-04 · 첨삭 강사 Sally

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The Caribbean is thr sea which is among Indies,Central America and the north coast og South America. We stayed at Barbados is located on the most East of caribbean Island. It is famous for great beach and sugar plantations and it is known as Tiger woods got married with someone a few years ago. My family were surfing in the ocean. We watched the Harrison is cave. It has become a tourist attraction after 1981 and one of a mysterious place because it found color crystal flows like water. We stayed weeks. It was so beautiful place so I didn't want to come back Korea. I really wanna go there again. I am sure that the day will be coming soon. I had grilled flying fish and rum is very cheap. It was shinny but not too hot and cooled breezes. I think I never forget my fantastic vacation.

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Hello there^^Thank you so much for sending your composition.^^I envy you. I do hope I can also go to that beautiful place. T. Razel The Caribbean is thr sea which is among Indies,Central America and the north coast og South America. >>>The Caribbean sea is located in Indies,Central America and the North Coast of South America.We stayed at Barbados is located on the most East of caribbean Island. >>>We stayed at Barbados which is located on the most East of Caribbean Island.It is famous for great beach and sugar plantations and it is known as Tiger woods got married with someone a few years ago. >>>It is famous for great beaches and sugar plantations and it is also known because it is the place where Tiger Woods got married with someone a few years ago.My family were surfing in the ocean. >>>My family was surifng in the ocean.We watched the Harrison is cave. >>>We watched the Harrison cave.It has become a tourist attraction after 1981 and one of a mysterious place because it found color crystal flows like water. >>>It has become a tourist attraction after 1981 and one of the mysterious places because you can find color crystal flows like water.We stayed weeks. >>We stayed there for weeks.It was so beautiful place so I didn\'t want to come back Korea. >>It was a very beautiful place so I didn\'t want to come back to Korea.I really wanna go there again. >>>>CORRECTI am sure that the day will be coming soon. >>> I am sure that day will come soon.I had grilled flying fish and rum is very cheap. >>>CORRECTIt was shinny but not too hot and cooled breezes. >>>It was shinny but not too hot and a cool breeze.I think I never forget my fantastic vacation. >>>I think I\'ll never forget my fantastic vacation.

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