It is my suggestion.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there again.
It was difficult? But you did a good job!
You are actually improving! I can still remember the first composition you sent me.
Now, you can already compose a lot of sentences. ^^ Your essays are great these days. ^^
I am so happy with your ideas in class and in writing. Have a great day.
Teacher Nina
It is too difficult to answer this question.
>> Correct!
because I think I\'m not good at learning English.
>> Correct!
I started learning English at the age of ten.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I started studying English when I was ten years old.
The first one which I got used to is listening. but it is still hard for me.
>> The first one was listening but it is still hard for me.
But I\'m sure that my ability to speak, write, read, listen is getting better than the past of my life.
>> But I\'m sure that my ability in speaking, writing, reading and listening is getting better than the past.
In my case, the way of learning English is simple. just memorize many vocabulary as possible.
>> In my case, the way of learning English is simple, just by memorizing many vocabulary words as much as possible.
I know it is too hard to keep going on.
>> Correct!
Memorizing word isn\'t accomplished in a day.
>> Memorizing words isn\'t accomplished everyday.
>> OR: I can\'t memorize words everyday.
So it is the best way to exert yourself in to studying English everyday.
>> So it is the best way to exert yourself in studying English everyday.
That is the way to succeed in learning English.
>> That is the way to succeed in learning the language.
Many people already know this theory, but very few people do in action.
>> Many people already know this theory, but very few people do it in action.
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