It is new Monday
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Hi Debby :)
I do not know this is a happy Monday. But I will enjoy this day and I hope you, too.
There is a one thing that I forgot to say. This is adult day. Is there also adult day?
It is a day to congratulate for people newly being an adult like me. So we are going to congratulate each other in the university festival. Although this is not a big festival but I'm really expecting it.
Get a fresh Mondany! XD
<Essay>
I want to produce a car if I build a new corporation. This will be a rough thing because there are so many car companies in the world. But I will compete with them on quility and cheep price. Then many people will come to buy my new cars.
p.s In the class, I said like "I went to watch a movie". Then can I say like "I went watch a movie"? I studied the 'go' grammar after seeing your tips. But I still confuse how I should use.
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Hi [이름]^^
Thanks for answering this and sending me your ideas.
You sentences are long and good and your getting better in organizing the thoughts of your sentences.
About your grammar question: Went and go are different tenses of verbs.
My tips on go are for future tenses. This is used to express ideas or plans that are not finished or you are still planning to do.
\" I\'ll GO watch a movie\" -You will still go. It is still a plan.
\" I WENT to a movie\" - You are done or finished watching a movie.
If you say \"I went watch a movie\", you are using two verbs. Choose one and change the verb tense to past tense.
The correction for this sentence would be in two sentences that you can use.
1. I WENT to a movie. [if you use the verb WENT]
2. I WATCHED a movie. [ if you use the verb WATCHED]
Both sentences are in the past tense. ^^
\"I went to watch a movie\" is more appropriate as simple as \"I went to a movie\" but if you mean \"watch a movie\" as a verb phrase, your sentence is acceptable and since you have the word \"to\" add a place that you did the action of watching like \"I went to watch a movie in the movie theater.\" or \" I went to the movie theater to watch a movie\". Then your sentence is complete.
Till the next class take care^^
T.Debby^^
Hi Debby :)I do not know this is a happy Monday. But I will enjoy this day and I hope you, too.
>> I do not know if this is a happy Monday. But I will enjoy this day and I hope you, too.There is a one thing that I forgot to say. This is adult day. Is there also adult day?
>> There is a one thing that I forgot to say. This is adult day. Is there also an adult day in your country?It is a day to congratulate for people newly being an adult like me.
>> It is a day to congratulate people for being new adults like me.
So we are going to congratulate each other in the university festival.
>> CORRECT
OR> We are going to greet each other in the University Festival.
Although this is not a big festival but I\'m really expecting it.
>> CORRECT
Or> It might not be a very meaningful event but I\'m looking forward to it.Get a fresh Mondany! XD
>> Get a fresh Monday! XD<Essay>I want to produce a car if I build a new corporation.
>> CORRECT
OR> I\'d like to be a car manufacturer.
This will be a rough thing because there are so many car companies in the world.
>> This will be a tough thing because there are so many car companies in the world.
But I will compete with them on quility and cheep price. Then many people will come to buy my new cars.
>> But I will compete with them on quality and cheap price. Then many people will come to buy my new cars.
p.s In the class, I said like \"I went to watch a movie\".
>> CORRECT
OR> I mentioned \" I went to watch a movie\" in clas today.
Then can I say like \"I went watch a movie\"? I studied the \'go\' grammar after seeing your tips. But I still confuse how I should use.
>> Then can I say like \"I went watch a movie\"? I studied the \'go\' grammar after seeing your tips. But I still confused how I should use it.
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