It is not the problem of money.

2014-08-05 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Much money is better than the lack of money. However, there are problems on money to solve. The problems come up by the person who spend and collect money not by the money. If people spend money wisely, money would have good effect on people as well as society. Therefore, the more money is the better.

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Hi there [이름]^^ Thank you for sending me this! Yes, money can do many things for people and this would include making life easier and more convinient. It\'s never the money that creates problems but it is truly the spender or the receiver of money. Thank you for you answers!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Much money is better than the lack of money. >> CORRECT OR> Being rich is better than being poor.  However, there are problems on money to solve. >> However, there are problems about money we need to solve. The problems come up by the person who spend and collect money not by the money. >> The problems that come up are by the person who spend and collect money not by the money itself. If people spend money wisely, money would have good effect on people as well as society. >> CORRECT OR> Spendig wisely makes good effect on the people and the society.Therefore, the more money is the better. >> Therefore, the more money then it is  for the better.

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