It is observed in many countries that less and less people nowadays go to the cinema to watch movies
학생이 쓴 원문
This generation has been lived in the age of globalization and lead the information age, in Corona stage.
So many people watch the cinema at home comfortably from NEFLIX and any other digital contents.
[이름] people like sharing their hobby through the internet. Finally movie theater is going to decline to show the movies ,
need to change useful purpose.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름] [이름]. Well, thank you for taking the time to write your thoughts about this issue. Have a nice restful sleep ahead. ^)^
T. Irene
This generation has been lived in the age of globalization and lead the information age, in Corona stage.
>>> This generation has lived in the age of globalization and lead the information age to the Corona stage.
So many people watch the cinema at home comfortably from NEFLIX and any other digital contents.
So many people watch the cinema at home comfortably from NEFLIX and any other digital contents.
>>> So many people watch movies at home comfortably from NETFLIX and any other digital tools
[이름] people like sharing their hobby through the internet.
[이름] people like sharing their hobby through the internet.
>>> Correct.
Finally movie theater is going to decline to show the movies, need to change useful purpose.
>>> In the end, movie theaters will lose their popularity and may need to find other useful purposes.
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