It is possible to know something about a person by the way he or she dresses.
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Hello [이름],
It is nice to know that you are interested in fashion. I enjoyed reading your composition because I also believe that we can sometimes tell a person\'s character by
just looking on how he or she dresses. You can have an idea on how a person values his or herself by the way he or she chooses an outfit to wear. It is really important
to be an observant in this world. Just continue what you are doing best!
Please take time to read the corrections below.
~~Teacher Kris
I agree this topic. Because I also interested in fashion.
>> I agree with this topic because I am also interested in fashion.
So I can know in a way a person\'s character, thinking, favorance and so on.
>> I can know a person\'s character, the way he or she thinks and his or her favorite things by the way a person dresses.
For example, the person who put on a make-up every morning is maybe deligent.
>> For example, I can say that a person who puts on make-up every morning can be a diligent person.
And I think the person who interested in fashion is more active than other people.
>> And I also think that a person who is interested in fashion is more active than other people.
The reason I think that is that my surrounding people are doing so. haha.
>> The reason that I can think of those things is because those are what I observe with the people that surround me. Haha.
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