It is responsibility of parents for chlidren to become overweight.
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It is responsibility of parents for chlidren to become overweight.
No matter how , the government say \"restain suger, juice, chocolate, candy...\"
it isn\'t be of no use.
Take care of chlidren at home
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
It is responsibility of parents for chlidren to become overweight.
>>> Parents are responsible for their overweight children.
No matter how , the government say \"restain suger, juice, chocolate, candy...\"
it isn\'t be of no use.
it isn\'t be of no use.
>>> No matter how the government reminds people to refrain from sugar, juice, chocolate, candies, etc\"
it isn\'t be of no use.
it isn\'t be of no use.
>>> It\'s all useless.
Take care of chlidren at home.
Take care of chlidren at home.
>>> So parents have to take care of their children at home.
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