It is sometimes thought that people who travel outside of their own country are more tolerant and un
학생이 쓴 원문
It is sometimes thought that people who travel outside of their own country are more tolerant and understanding of others.
To what extent do you agree?
I agree with 60%.
I think... someone who travel outside of their own country can be have a variety of experience.
And then they also can study convention of other country.
That\'s why they can have a variety of thinking , view.
However these opinion is not same mean with that they are more tolerant and understanding of others.
They just have little bit more tolerant and understanding than others.
강사 첨삭
Hi Anna!
This is the time for you to widen your vocabulary.
It would be easier for you to express your thoughts with the right words.
There are a lot of expressions that would be appropriate in every situation.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I agree with 60%.
>> I agree at 60%.
I think... someone who travel outside of their own country can be have a variety of experience.
I think... someone who travel outside of their own country can be have a variety of experience.
>> I think someone who travels outside of their own country can have a variety of experience.
And then they also can study convention of other country.
And then they also can study convention of other country.
>> The can also learn different customs of people from other countries.
That\'s why they can have a variety of thinking , view.
That\'s why they can have a variety of thinking , view.
>> That\'s why they can widen their perspective and points of view.
However these opinion is not same mean with that they are more tolerant and understanding of others.
However these opinion is not same mean with that they are more tolerant and understanding of others.
>> However these opinions don\'t mean that they are more tolerant and understanding of others.
They just have little bit more tolerant and understanding than others.
They just have little bit more tolerant and understanding than others.
>> They are just a little bit more tolerant and understanding than others.
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