It is the 21st century. Why are people in some places still starving and malnourished?
학생이 쓴 원문
Because they didn\'t get a job or work, but they don\'t seem to pay the right price. I think they might have been addicted to drugs or gambling and lost all your money or been addicted to alcohol.
강사 첨삭
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~ Teacher Tricia
Because they didn\'t get a job or work, but they don\'t seem to pay the right price.
>>> CORRECT!
I think they might have been addicted to drugs or gambling and lost all your money or been addicted to alcohol.
>>> I think they might have been addicted to drugs or gambling and lost all their money or been addicted to alcohol.
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