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Traditionally, a red carpet is rolled out to welcome VIPs such as dignitaries and celebrities at formal events. But did you know that the red carpet first started with the early railroads? Train conductors commonly laid out a red carpet to welcome passengers and direct them to the correct location on the train. Today the red carpet is associated mostly with Hollywood and the entertainment industry. Each year, for example, millions of people around the world turn on their Tvs to watch the Oscar Awards. Seeing the stars arrive in their formal gowns and outfits and walk down the red carpet is one of the highlights of the program.But it’s not just the Oscars where a red carpet is used to make people feel important. Red carpets are used at music awards shows and movie premieres.
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Traditionally, a red carpet is rolled out to welcome VIPs such as dignitaries and celebrities at formal events.
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But did you know that the red carpet first started with the early railroads?
>>Correct
Train conductors commonly laid out a red carpet to welcome passengers and direct them to the correct location on the train.
>>Correct
Today the red carpet is associated mostly with Hollywood and the entertainment industry.
>>correct
Each year, for example, millions of people around the world turn on their Tvs to watch the Oscar Awards.
>>Correct
Seeing the stars arrive in their formal gowns and outfits and walk down the red carpet is one of the highlights of the program.
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But it’s not just the Oscars where a red carpet is used to make people feel important.
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Red carpets are used at music awards
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