It is up to us to do facebook.
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Writing Exercise:
Facebook often gets in trouble for not having very good privacy settings. Do you think that this really is a big problem? Explain your answer.
: I thought SNS including facebook keep someone\'s privacy not well. But we do facebook even though we already know it. It might be problmes that facebook doesn\'t have a good privacy settings, but it is up to us to use the facebook. If you think that facebook is not safe for protecting my privacy, you don\'t have to use it. so I don\'t think that facebook\'s policy for not having a good privacy settings is not a big problem.
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I thought SNS including facebook keep someone\'s privacy not well. But we do facebook even though we already know it.
>> I think Social Networking Sites like Facebook don\'t keep people\'s privacy well enough. However, we still use it even when we already know about it.
It might be problmes that facebook doesn\'t have a good privacy settings, but it is up to us to use the facebook.
>> It\'s a problem that Facebook doesn\'t have good privacy settings, but it is up to us.
If you think that facebook is not safe for protecting my privacy, you don\'t have to use it.
>> If you think it isn\'t safe, then don\'t use it.
so I don\'t think that facebook\'s policy for not having a good privacy settings is not a big problem.
>> So, I don\'t that\'s a big problem.
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