It is very difficult issue.
학생이 쓴 원문
If the immigrants are allowed to enter the country legally, they should have the same all rights as an existing citizen. But otherwise, it is difficult to allow them. Because if the illegal cases are allowed unconditionally, there are so many troubles in the society.
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Hey, Ju [이름]. It was a bit of a challenging topic but you got through. Great job on delivering your opinions on this issue. I appreciate your sharing your ideas. Have a good evening. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
It is very difficult issue.
>> It is a very difficult issue.
If the immigrants are allowed to enter the country legally, they should have the same all rights as an existing citizen.
>> If the immigrants are allowed to enter the country legally, they should all have the same rights as an existing citizen.
But otherwise, it is difficult to allow them.
>> CORRECT =)
Because if the illegal cases are allowed unconditionally, there are so many troubles in the society.
>> Because if the illegal cases are allowed unconditionally, there would be so much trouble/ problem in society.
It is very difficult issue.
>> It is a very difficult issue.
If the immigrants are allowed to enter the country legally, they should have the same all rights as an existing citizen.
>> If the immigrants are allowed to enter the country legally, they should all have the same rights as an existing citizen.
But otherwise, it is difficult to allow them.
>> CORRECT =)
Because if the illegal cases are allowed unconditionally, there are so many troubles in the society.
>> Because if the illegal cases are allowed unconditionally, there would be so much trouble/ problem in society.
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