It is very difficult to define it.
학생이 쓴 원문
It is very difficult to define it.
because having stisfaction or not is defend on what in one's mind
It is differ from case by case.
I think It is important what is their back ground circumstances.
Some people give her all money which she devoted whole life to earn.
but other people, even they are rich person, they don't be satisfied with what they have. In these days, there are many charity events on many streets that some volunteers ring a bell and collect some money from strangers.
What I heard was really amazing story. An anonymous person put his big fortune, in a pot. I think the spirit of noblesse oblige is alive in today.
11.1.5
Finally she left us. we laid on bed and talked to each other about our academy stories, and girls who met in past.
and we talked about kidnapping in traveling site.
Suddenly, we thought that Why the host told us not to lock the door??
if she want to kidnap us, what should we do? and what can we do?
we worried a lot but finally we fell a sleep.
강사 첨삭
Hi there. Did you have a good Christmas?
Thank you for taking time to answer the homework. You are right, satisfaction can be different for each person because each person\'s unique circumstances change their perspective about it.^^ That is a very good point you made.^^
Talk to you more later!^^
~T. Nina~
It is very difficult to define it. because having stisfaction or not is defend on what in one\'s mind
>> It is very difficult to define because satisfaction depends on how each person thinks. It is differ from case by case.
>> It is different from case to case.
OR> It differs from case to case.I think It is important what is their back ground circumstances.
>> I think it\'s important what their background circumstances are.Some people give her all money which she devoted whole life to earn.
>> Some people can give away money that they devoted their whole life to earn.but other people, even they are rich person, they don\'t be satisfied with what they have.
>> But other people, even if they are rich, are not satisfied with what they have.
In these days, there are many charity events on many streets that some volunteers ring a bell and collect some money from strangers.
>> In these days, there are many charity events on many streets where some volunteers ring a bell and collect money from strangers.
What I heard was really amazing story.
>> I heard a really amazing story.
An anonymous person put his big fortune, in a pot.
>> An anonymous person put a big fortune in the pot.
I think the spirit of noblesse oblige is alive in today.>> I think the nobleness of the human spirit is still alive today.^^
11.1.5
Finally she left us.
>> Finally, she left us.
we laid on bed and talked to each other about our academy stories, and girls who met in past.
>> We lay on the bed and talked about our academy stories and girls we met in the past. and we talked about kidnapping in traveling site.
>> We also talked about kidnapping cases from traveling sites. Suddenly, we thought that Why the host told us not to lock the door??
>> Suddenly, we thought about why the host asked us not to lock the door.if she want to kidnap us, what should we do? and what can we do?
>> If she wants to kidnap us, what should we do? And what can we do?we worried a lot but finally we fell a sleep.
>> We worried a lot but finally, we fell asleep.^^
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