It is very hard to make someone feel comfortable at first time.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was in middle school, there were lots of time to make new friends.
because I wanted to get used to them, I always talked a lot with common subject.
As I grew up, I felt It was no use to talk a lot when meet a new-face.
the most important thing is time and frequency.
The position of my work needs talking someone who enlisted to airforce.
So I need to check them if he have some problems or special things which I have to know especially about their home circumstances.
When I have not enough time, I try to find the common points with him.
and then I talk to him about my past life to make him feel we have something to shere.
After this process, most of people open their minds and start talking their life.
If he have problem or not, I treat him very kindly.
and always say that whenever you think you are in trouble, you can come to me and I will help you.
that is kind of skill that I have to make someone feel comfortable.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday!~
Thank you for sharing your special skill in this homework!
I can say that it is a unique skill and I think you can be more
familiar with it and be familiar with different personalities.
Anyhow, please check the corrections I made and if you have other questions, feel free to ask them in class.
See you then!~
~~Teacher Nina~~
When I was in middle school, there were lots of time to make new friends.
>> Correct.because I wanted to get used to them, I always talked a lot with common subject.
>> Because I wanted to get used to them, I always talked a lot with them with a common subject/common subjects.As I grew up, I felt It was no use to talk a lot when meet a new-face.
>> As I grew up, I felt it was no use to talk a lot when meeting a new face.the most important thing is time and frequency.
>> The most important things are time and frequency.The position of my work needs talking someone who enlisted to airforce.
>> The position/main task of my job needs talking to someone who is enlisted to air force.So I need to check them if he have some problems or special things which I have to know especially about their home circumstances.
>> So I need to check them if they have some problems or special things which I have to know, especially about their home circumstances.When I have not enough time, I try to find the common points with him.
>> When I don\'t have enough time, I try to find the common points with him/them.and then I talk to him about my past life to make him feel we have something to shere.
>> And then I talk to him/them about my past life to make him/them feel we have something to share.After this process, most of people open their minds and start talking their life.
>> After this process, most of the people open their minds and start talking about their life.If he have problem or not, I treat him very kindly.
>> If he doesn\'t have a problem, I treat him very kindly.and always say that whenever you think you are in trouble, you can come to me and I will help you.
>> Correct.that is kind of skill that I have to make someone feel comfortable.
>> That Is a kind of skill that I have to make someone feel comfortable.^^
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