It\'like to become friend more than enslave.
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think many people in Korea are enslaved by time?
I think that many people was enslaved of time in
Korea. Because of \'fast and fast\'.
Korea people realy like fast and fast.
It\'mean that let\'s do very fast. korea language is
\'빨리 빨리\'.
I think that it is important deeply proces more than fast result.
They don\'t wait the other person. They want to
get fast result. andthen, they don\'t want to get
Long proces. Fast Time is their life.
I want to enjoy my life. And time is my friend.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Sir Ko. Yes, I think it is important to slow down and live life. We only live once, might as well enjoy it.
I think that many people was enslaved of time in Korea. Because of \'fast and fast\'.
>>> I think that many people were enslaved by time in Korea because of the \'fast and fast\' society.
Korea people realy like fast and fast.
Korea people realy like fast and fast.
>>> Korean people really like the fast lifestyle.
It\'mean that let\'s do very fast.
>>> It means \"let\'s do things very fast.\"
korea language is \'빨리 빨리\'.
>>> In the Korean language, we say \'빨리 빨리\'.
I think that it is important deeply proces more than fast result.
>>> I think that it is important to deeply process something more than a fast result.
They don\'t wait the other person.
>>> They don\'t wait for the other person.
They want to get a fast result.
>>> correct
and then, they don\'t want to get Long proces.
>>> And then, they don\'t want to do the long process.
Fast time is their life.
>>> correct
I want to enjoy my life. And time is my friend.
>>> correct (I want to enjoy my life and time is my friend.)
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