It rains a lot.

2011-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

학생이 쓴 원문

Now, It rains too much. I think that sky window is opening. A few days ago, The rain came down too much in seoul. This day, I had never seen such many cars is floating on the rain in center of seoul. A few of cars stucked the building on the third floors by landslide. both of owners of a car and a building might cry. I hope stop rain before causing as past accident.

강사 첨삭

Hello Susan! I know how you feel about floods and landslides. Well, I hope that doesn뭪 happen again. I feel sad to hear this news. Please just take care of yourself. Okay? T.Faye Here are your corrections: Now, It rains too much.>>Correct! >>Or: It is raining too much now.I think that sky window is opening.>>I think that the sky뭩 window is opening.A few days ago, The rain came down too much in seoul.>>The rain came to Seoul a few days ago.This day, I had never seen such many cars is floating on the rain in center of seoul.>>I have never seen many cars floating on the streets of SeoulA few of cars stucked the building on the third floors by landslide.>>A few cars were stuck to building뭩 third floor because of the landslides.both of owners of a car and a building might cry.>>The owners of the cars and building might cry.I hope stop rain before causing as past accident. >>I hope that the rain would stop causing these accidents.

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