It\'s a good way....
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I\'m not a Chrischian. So I don\'t give Christmas card to someone every year. But, the tradition of giving Christmas card is good way to greet to someone in the end of the year.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju [이름]. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts. I think this tradition has been forgotten by many. It must be because people do not want to be bothered to send them. But it would be nice to have that kind of tradition again especially these days. Have a nice weekend.
~Teacher Jane c\",)
I\'m not a Chrischian.
>> I am not a Christian.
So I don\'t give Christmas card to someone every year.
>> So I do not give Christmas cards to anyone every year.
But, the tradition of giving Christmas card is good way to greet to someone in the end of the year.
>> But the tradition of giving Christmas cards is a good way to greet someone at the end of the year.
~Teacher Jane c\",)
I\'m not a Chrischian.
>> I am not a Christian.
So I don\'t give Christmas card to someone every year.
>> So I do not give Christmas cards to anyone every year.
But, the tradition of giving Christmas card is good way to greet to someone in the end of the year.
>> But the tradition of giving Christmas cards is a good way to greet someone at the end of the year.
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