It's a letter for my foreign friend.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Heidi. Those photos that you sent me are very nice and it made me want to get married.
There are no plans to get married. I'm getting board with my boyfried and job.
Anyway, this weekends my mother will come to seoul to see me.
My boyfriend really wants to see my mother. So, we might have dinner together.
I don't want to think about it. It'll be terrible.
Last saturday, I was sking with my boyfirend. I lost my cellphone in the suttle bus.
I have to pay the price of my cellphone that I was suppose to pay on the 18-month installment, about 200 dollars.
I'm still tired, as a result of sking. But After working, I should go buy my new cellphone.
I'm wating for calling from company that I sent a resume. So I have to keep my cellphone.
By the way, I'm so happy to hear that you'll come to Korea.
We should meet. Please let me know you plan right after it'll be decied.
You're really pretty inpretty in that photo you sent me.
Thank you for letting me see it.
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thank you for having time to write your composition. Please be careful with your spelling.
Here are my corrections and I hope you can have time to read them. See you!
t. Ritchel
Hi, Heidi. >> Hi Heidi,
Those photos that you sent me are very nice and it made me want to get married.
>> Those photos that you have sent me are very nice and it made me want to get married.
There are no plans to get married.
>> I have no plan to get married.
I\'m getting board with my boyfried and job.
>> I am getting bored with my boyfriend and my job.Anyway, this weekends my mother will come to seoul to see me.
>> Anyway, this weekend, my mother will come to Seoul to see me.My boyfriend really wants to see my mother.
>>Correct!
So, we might have dinner together.
>> So, we might have dinner together.I don\'t want to think about it. It\'ll be terrible.
>> Correct!Last saturday, I was sking with my boyfirend.
>> Last Saturday, I went skiing with my boyfriend.
I lost my cellphone in the suttle bus.
>> I lost my cellphone in the shuttle bus.I have to pay the price of my cellphone that I was suppose to pay on the 18-month installment, about 200 dollars.
>> I have to pay about 200 dollars for my cellphone for 18 months installment.I\'m still tired, as a result of sking.
>>I\'m still tired from skiing.
But After working, I should go buy my new cellphone.
>>After work, I should go buy myself a new cellphone.I\'m wating for calling from company that I sent a resume.
>> I am waiting for a call from the company where I sent my resume.
So I have to keep my cellphone.
>> Correct!By the way, I\'m so happy to hear that you\'ll come to Korea.
>> Correct!We should meet.
>> Correct!
Please let me know you plan right after it\'ll be decied.
>> Please let me know about your plan right after your decision.You\'re really pretty inpretty in that photo you sent me.
>> You really look pretty in that photo you have sent me.Thank you for letting me see it.
>> Correct!
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