it's a piece of my cover letter.

I am writing to apply for a regulatory affairs & Quality Control position currently available with your company. Becton, Dickinson and Company (BD) is an outstanding pioneer in medical devices and a fast-moving global institution to which I will be a great asset. I majored in Biomedical Engineering at Yonsei University. I’ve studied about basic theory of medical devices, electronic, medical law, and biosensor in addition to biochemistry, anatomy and physiology for understanding the human body. I also have received several scholarships. As a qualified applicant with over a year experience of regulatory affairs and quality assurance in medical field, I'm good at understanding mechanical disease and system and leading to good relationship with coworkers. My strengths combined with varied activities will make me a strong and immediate impact at BD. I am excited about this opportunity to join BD. I will look forward to a positive response from you. Thank you for your consideration.

Hello there! Wow, I like the way you wrote your application letter. It is full of confidence which I think is very much needed when you apply for a job. By the way, some corrections and suggestions are made below. Check them out!  Good luck to you and have a great evening! ~T. Ritchel I am writing to apply for a regulatory affairs & Quality Control position currently available with your company. >>I am writing to apply for Regulatory Affairs and Quality Control position currently available in your company. Becton Dickinson and Company (BD) is an outstanding pioneer in medical devices and a fast-moving global institution to which I will be a great asset.>>Correct I majored in Biomedical Engineering at Yonsei University. I’ve studied about basic theory of medical devices, electronic, medical law, and biosensor in addition to biochemistry, anatomy and physiology to understand the human body. >>Correct OR: >>With a BS degree in Biomedical Engineering at Yonsei University, I have a full understanding of the basic medical devices, electronics, medical law, and biosensor in addition to biochemistry, anatomy and physiology to better understand the human body. I also have received several scholarships. >>CorrectAs a qualified applicant with over a year experience of regulatory affairs and quality assurance in medical field, I\'m good at understanding mechanical disease and system and leading to good relationship with coworkers. >>As a qualified applicant with over a year of experience in regulatory affairs and quality assurance in medical field, I\'m good at understanding mechanical disease and the system leading to good relationship with co-workers. My strengths combined with varied activities will make me a strong and immediate impact at BD. >>My strengths combined with varied activities will make me a strong and an immediate impact to BD. I am excited about this opportunity to join BD. >>I am excited about this opportunity to join your company.  I will look forward to a positive response from you. >>I look forward to a positive response from you. OR: >>I look forward to speaking with you about this employment opportunity. Thank you for your consideration. >>Correct