It's a refreshing morning.

2011-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

Yesterday I was tired terribly so I decided to do what I need to do. My boyfriend and I ate some eels which I belive good to health and I went to bed early. And I am feeling fresh now. um...I had a breakfast which is a my mom's cooking. But why I feel hungry again? I look forward to eating lunch. Anyway I did sit-up ten times last night. It means that I can use my waist and I can go to ski resort. Because I swore at my boyfreind If I can do sit-up I'll go boarding and he agreed. As soon as I get my salary I'll go to resort with my friends including my boyfriend. I feel happy just to think about it.^^

강사 첨삭

Hi J!!! Wow, I'm glad that you can do sit ups now. Its an indication that your slipped disk is getting better. Well attend your therapy religiously for your own good. Always have a great day and take care girl! Lei J   Yesterday I was tired terribly so I decided to do what I need to do. >>Yesterday, I was terribly tired so I decided to do what I needed to finish. >>Yesterday, I was terribly tired so I decided to do whatever I needed to do. My boyfriend and I ate some eels which I belive good to health and I went to bed early. >>My boyfriend and I ate some eels which I believe is good to our health and I went to bed early. And I am feeling fresh now. >>correct um...I had a breakfast which is a my mom's cooking. >>I ate my mom's cooking for breakfast. >>I ate the food that my mom prepared for breakfast. But why I feel hungry again? >>But why do I feel hungry again. I look forward to eating lunch. >>I am looking forward for lunch. Anyway I did sit-up ten times last night. >>Anyways I did ten sit ups last night. It means that I can use my waist and I can go to ski resort. >>correct Because I swore to my boyfriend that If I can do sit-up I'll go boarding and he agreed. >>correct As soon as I get my salary I'll go to resort with my friends including my boyfriend. >>As soon as I'll get my salary, I'll go to a ski resort with my friends and boyfriend. I feel happy just to think about it.^^ >>I feel happy just thinking about it.

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