It's a refreshing morning.
학생이 쓴 원문
Yesterday I was tired terribly so I decided to do what I need to do.
My boyfriend and I ate some eels which I belive good to health and
I went to bed early.
And I am feeling fresh now.
um...I had a breakfast which is a my mom's cooking.
But why I feel hungry again?
I look forward to eating lunch.
Anyway I did sit-up ten times last night.
It means that I can use my waist and I can go to ski resort.
Because I swore at my boyfreind If I can do sit-up I'll go boarding
and he agreed.
As soon as I get my salary I'll go to resort with my friends
including my boyfriend.
I feel happy just to think about it.^^
강사 첨삭
Hi J!!! Wow, I'm glad that you can do sit ups now. Its an indication that your slipped disk is getting better. Well attend your therapy religiously for your own good. Always have a great day and take care girl!
Lei J
Yesterday I was tired terribly so I decided to do what I need to do.
>>Yesterday, I was terribly tired so I decided to do what I needed to finish.
>>Yesterday, I was terribly tired so I decided to do whatever I needed to do.
My boyfriend and I ate some eels which I belive good to health and I went to bed early.
>>My boyfriend and I ate some eels which I believe is good to our health and I went to bed early.
And I am feeling fresh now.
>>correct
um...I had a breakfast which is a my mom's cooking.
>>I ate my mom's cooking for breakfast.
>>I ate the food that my mom prepared for breakfast.
But why I feel hungry again?
>>But why do I feel hungry again.
I look forward to eating lunch.
>>I am looking forward for lunch.
Anyway I did sit-up ten times last night.
>>Anyways I did ten sit ups last night.
It means that I can use my waist and I can go to ski resort.
>>correct
Because I swore to my boyfriend that If I can do sit-up I'll go boarding and he agreed.
>>correct
As soon as I get my salary I'll go to resort with my friends including my boyfriend.
>>As soon as I'll get my salary, I'll go to a ski resort with my friends and boyfriend.
I feel happy just to think about it.^^
>>I feel happy just thinking about it.
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