it's a thanksgiving day

2011-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 ritchel

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I only have a few days that korea’s thanksgiving holiday. Because I’m marred. I should fateher in-law’s house first. This is customs south korea.Father in-law is a pleasant and friendly like a my father. Most of the best is top handsome face. So my husband was very handsome too.i’m so proud of that. Our children will same that. And 2nd day of holiday, I will want to go my mother’s home. She cook the thanksgiving food everyear. So I have to help her. During the cooking, we have many time to each privacy.family problem, work place, latest to do or hobby etc.I think that it is so happy with family. I learn from our family The family is the most valuable to me. And thanksgiving day can speak each other so many time and do tother them.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!! It's really nice to know that you're excited to spend your time with your family this Thanksgiving holiday. I hope you'll have so much fun together. Take care and talk to you soon then.   I only have a few days that korea’s thanksgiving holiday. >> I only have a few days left before we celebrate Korea's Thanksgiving holiday. Because I’m marred. I should fateher in-law’s house first. >> Because I'm already married, I should go to my father-in-law's house first. This is customs south korea. >> This is a custom here in South Korea. Father in-law is a pleasant and friendly like a my father. Most of the best is top handsome face. >> My father-in-law is pleasant and friendly like my own father and most especially he has a handsome face. So my husband was very handsome too.i’m so proud of that. >> So my husband is very handsome too and I'm so proud of that. Our children will same that. >> Our children will also have the same good-looking face as well.And 2nd day of holiday, I will want to go my mother’s home. >> For the second day of the celebration, I will go to my mother's house.She cook the thanksgiving food everyear. So I have to help her. >> She cooks all the Thanksgiving food every year.During the cooking, we have many time to each privacy.family problem, work place, latest to do or hobby etc.I think that it is so happy with family. >> During the preparation, we have all the private time discuss about family problems, work, latest activities or hobbies etc., I think it's a fun time with my family. I learn from our family The family is the most valuable to me. And thanksgiving day can speak each other so many time and do tother them. >> I was thought that family is the most valuable thing in life and Thanksgiving is the time we can all share our time together .

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