It\'s an organ we need to live.

2023-09-21 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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It\'s an organ we need to live. And some people made sad songs or books with the word heart. As it is an important organ for us, it is also a term often used when we like someone or are hurt by someone\'s words with lyrics or descriptions in a book.

강사 첨삭

Great job on your homework, Da [이름]!

You\'ve described the heart beautifully and its significance in our lives. Keep up the good work, and I\'m excited to see more of your progress in our class. You\'re doing great!

~Teacher Cathy

 

It\'s an organ we need to live.

>>CORRECT

OR>>It\'s a vital organ necessary for our survival.

And some people made sad songs or books with the word heart.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Some people create sad songs or books using the word heart.

As it is an important organ for us, it is also a term often used when we like someone or are hurt by someone\'s words with lyrics or descriptions in a book.

>>Because the heart is essential to us, it\'s frequently referenced when we have feelings for someone or when we\'re affected by someone\'s words in song lyrics or book descriptions.

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