It\'s because they can\'t express what they intend with words.

2019-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

학생이 쓴 원문

I\'ve heard that things are happen often in France. I don\'t use gesture when I speak. Today, it starts raining this evening maybe it will continue until the night. Thesedays I am going well alone thanks to your English teaching. It is fun. Speaking English is pleasant for me in dull my life. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you so much for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night ☺


I\'ve heard that things are happen often in France.

>> I\'ve heard that a lot of things happened in France.


I don\'t use gesture when I speak.

>> CORRECT


Today, it starts raining this evening maybe it will continue until the night.

>> It started raining tonight and I think that it will continue until later tonight.


Thesedays I am going well alone thanks to your English teaching. 

>> These days, I am doing great thanks to your English teaching.


It is fun.

>> CORRECT


Speaking English is pleasant for me in dull my life.

>> CORRECT


Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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