^ ^.it's been a long time.~
학생이 쓴 원문
Good mornig. lei.~
wow. it's our first meeting this week.
On monday. i forgot to change my information. because i changed my phone number. with forgetting that, i waited your call. * *
and on Thursday, i went out to have a lunch with my co-worker. it took many times if we go out for meals.
On wednesday, i went to attend the naming ceremony. we had a luncheon at the hotel during our class time. so i had to postpone our class.
i thought that you would be worry about my being absent. i wondered if i had to leave a message for my being absent. but i was quiet busy, so i couldn't do it.
Please understand me with your magnanimity.
i have some topics for our class. it's about the naming ceremony.
see you on the line.~ my cell phone number [휴대전화]
강사 첨삭
Hi there dear [이름]!!
It’s been four days. I missed you so much. Now I don’t have to worry and wonder why you were not able to take our class. But [이름], we have one problem, you indicated here in your composition that you changed your phone number. I think you need to call our managers and inform them about it because it still shows here in our system your old number and that is the reason why I wasn’t able to reach you. Oh I hope everything will be fixed so we can have the class tomorrow. I miss you!!
Lei J
Good mornig. lei.~
>>correctwow. it's our first meeting this week.
>>correctOn monday. i forgot to change my information.
>>Last Monday, I forgot to change my registration information
because i changed my phone number.
>>correct
with forgetting that, i waited your call. * *
>>Forgtting to do that, I waited for your calland on Thursday, i went out to have a lunch with my co-worker.
>>and last Thursday, I went out to have lunch with my co-worker
it took many times if we go out for meals.
>>it takes a lot of time if we lunch outOn wednesday, i went to attend the naming ceremony.
>>yesterday, I attended a naming ceremony.
we had a luncheon at the hotel during our class time.
>>correct
so i had to postpone our class.
>>correcti thought that you would be worry about my being absent.
>>I thought that you will be worrying about me for being absent.
i wondered if i had to leave a message for being absent.
>>correct
but i was quiet busy, so i couldn't do it.
>>but I was quite busy, so I couldn’t do itPlease understand me with your magnanimity. >>correct
i have some topics for our class. it's about the naming ceremony.>>correct
see you on the line.~
>>correct
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