^ ^.it's been a long time.~

2010-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Good mornig. lei.~ wow. it's our first meeting this week. On monday. i forgot to change my information. because i changed my phone number. with forgetting that, i waited your call. * * and on Thursday, i went out to have a lunch with my co-worker. it took many times if we go out for meals. On wednesday, i went to attend the naming ceremony. we had a luncheon at the hotel during our class time. so i had to postpone our class. i thought that you would be worry about my being absent. i wondered if i had to leave a message for my being absent. but i was quiet busy, so i couldn't do it. Please understand me with your magnanimity. i have some topics for our class. it's about the naming ceremony. see you on the line.~ my cell phone number [휴대전화]

강사 첨삭

Hi there dear [이름]!! It’s been four days. I missed you so much. Now I don’t have to worry and wonder why you were not able to take our class. But [이름], we have one problem, you indicated here in your composition that you changed your phone number. I think you need to call our managers and inform them about it because it still shows here in our system your old number and that is the reason why I wasn’t able to reach you. Oh I hope everything will be fixed so we can have the class tomorrow. I miss you!! Lei J   Good mornig. lei.~ >>correctwow. it's our first meeting this week. >>correctOn monday. i forgot to change my information. >>Last Monday, I forgot to change my registration information because i changed my phone number. >>correct with forgetting that, i waited your call. * * >>Forgtting to do that, I waited for your calland on Thursday, i went out to have a lunch with my co-worker. >>and last Thursday, I went out to have lunch with my co-worker it took many times if we go out for meals. >>it takes a lot of time if we lunch outOn wednesday, i went to attend the naming ceremony. >>yesterday, I attended a naming ceremony. we had a luncheon at the hotel during our class time. >>correct so i had to postpone our class. >>correcti thought that you would be worry about my being absent. >>I thought that you will be worrying about me for being absent. i wondered if i had to leave a message for being absent. >>correct but i was quiet busy, so i couldn't do it. >>but I was quite busy, so I couldn’t do itPlease understand me with your magnanimity. >>correct i have some topics for our class. it's about the naming ceremony.>>correct see you on the line.~ >>correct

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