It\'s best to chat at home together.

2024-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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It\'s best to chat at home together. My parents have been to various places with their children, so they have various experiences, so I don\'t really want to go anywhere until now. So I also like to visit new movies or new places. But the best thing is to enjoy talking in a comfortable house.

강사 첨삭

Hello Da [이름],

Great job on your homework! I think it\'s great that you like spending time chatting with your family at home. While visiting new movies and places can be fun, there\'s just something special about relaxing and talking together in the comfort of your home. Keep up the good work!

~Teacher Cathy

 

It\'s best to chat at home together.

>>CORRECT

OR>>It\'s best to chat together at home.

My parents have been to various places with their children, so they have various experiences, so I don\'t really want to go anywhere until now.

>>CORRECT

OR>>My parents have traveled to many places with their children and have many experiences, so I haven\'t felt the need to go anywhere until now.

So I also like to visit new movies or new places.

>>So I also like to watch new movies or visit new places.

But the best thing is to enjoy talking in a comfortable house.

>>CORRECT

OR>>But the best thing is enjoying conversations in a comfortable home.

 

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