It\'s better to have a 4-day weekday and 3-day weekend. Do you agree or disagree?
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Well..If we could receice the same salary, I totally would agree with a 4-day working day. The condition of working should be the same or similiar as previous one. Those two fators can be satisfied, I would love to accept the proposal.
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Jean
Well..If we could receice the same salary, I totally would agree with a 4-day working day.
>>Or: If we could receive the same compensation, I would without a doubt agree with a 4-day working day.
The condition of working should be the same or similiar as previous one.
>> The work conditions should be the same or similar as the previous one.
Those two fators can be satisfied, I would love to accept the proposal.
>> Assuming that those two factors are met, I would love to accept the proposal.
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