it's clod today in korea

2011-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Erica

학생이 쓴 원문

Good evening Today is very cold weather ~~~! I like warm weather T_T Anyway I saw a romantic and funny play with my friend in saturday And after the play finished , we had a delicious pizza and pasta It was very happy time And actors were hansome guys in the play So many ladies admired their apperance They was tall, hansome and humorous ~~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ I am so happy that you had a great time last Saturday. ^^ I want to meet the actors in the play. Kkkkk. ^^ Chang na ne. ^^ I hope you will have a great time tomorrow! ^^ Good night!   Good evening >> CORRECT!Today is very cold weather ~~~!>>Today is very cold!I like warm weather T_T >> CORRECT! (me too!)Anyway I saw a romantic and funny play with my friend in saturday >>Anyway, I watched a romantic comedy play with my friend last Saturday. And after the play finished , we had a delicious pizza and pasta >>After the play we eat delicious pizza and pasta.It was very happy time >>It was a very happy time. And actors were hansome guys in the play >>The actors in the play were handsome.So many ladies admired their apperance>>So many ladies admired them.They was tall, hansome and humorous ~~ >>They are tall, handsome and humorous. (I like to meet them.kkkkkk. ^^)  

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