It's cool to be smart. Tell us about the subjects or ideas that excite your intellectual curiosity.
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Teacher Travis.
The best way is to experience everything if you can.
>>The best way to excite my intellectual curiosity is to try everything as much as I can.
Especially it effects to have knowledge to be get from only experience.
>>Especially is affects to have a knowledge to get from only experience.
so I recommend that going to travel abroad or within country where you haven’t been to will help you to get various experiences.
>>So I recommend that going abroad or travel within the country where you haven\'t been will help you to get various experiences.
When you are a student who are not worry about getting a job, having new experiences will be an good opportunity to live.
>>When you are a kind of student who are not worry about getting a job, having new experiences will be an good opportunity to live.
I could see that most of the people who went to somewhere to do anything they want like international volunteering or just go to travel have more wide-vision and awake view.
>>Correct.
Although I have’t experienced enough I can tell you that experiencing everything whether that is good side or not.
>>Although I have no enough experience, I can tell you that experiencing everything whether that is good side or not.
It definitely must be your power to deal with the problem and your intellectual curiosity.
>>Correct.
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