It\'s feel so wierd :)
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m broke up with my boyfriend.
I don\'t want to feel lonely that\'s why I make a boyfirend suddenly.
And suddenly broke up with him.
These day I keep thinking about my ex-boyfriend.
When I meet the ex-boyfriend, we were a lot of anniversaries together.
Honestly just now my truly mind, I want with my ex-boyfriend at my birthday.
Not sad, but it\'s little bit of wierd feeling these day.
I miss that day.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
I feel sad for you. It\'s okay. Maybe you guys were not meant to be together. There will always be a perfect person for us.
I\'m broke up with my boyfriend.
>> I broke up with my boyfriend.
I don\'t want to feel lonely that\'s why I make a boyfirend suddenly.
>> I didn\'t want to be lonely so I decided to have a boyfriend.
And suddenly broke up with him.
>> Although, I suddenly broke up with him.
These day I keep thinking about my ex-boyfriend.
>> These days, I keep thinking about my ex-boyfriend.
When I meet the ex-boyfriend, we were a lot of anniversaries together.
>> When I was still with my ex-boyfriend, we had a lot of anniversaries together.
Honestly just now my truly mind, I want with my ex-boyfriend at my birthday.
>> Honestly, I want to be with my ex-boyfriend on my birthday.
Not sad, but it\'s little bit of wierd feeling these day.
>> I am not sad but I feel weird these days.
I miss that day.
>> I miss those days with him.
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