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2014-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1.Suporn is extremely ____ about going to Kyoto. a.excited 2.She ___ me a pencil yesterday. a.lent 3.Elin has always been an ___ person. a.independent 4.The child's tooth is ___. b.loose 5.Mike was deeply ___ by the news of his mother's death. b.affected Hello teacher long time no talk~! You know that I have a specail task to do. So I postphoned my class for 1 week. Though busy days are over but there are lots of paperworks. and I am going to go business trip with my coworker tomorrow. So I have to make the report of the result. then I have to go civil airport to see many thing including their personel system. so that's why I postphoned my class. Maybe, I have to prepare some kind of presentation. Do you remember I had a presentation in front of many audiences last year? I have to do that again. Not only in my office but also I have lots of homework to do. yes, I will submit as many homework as I can. I hope I can handle all of these~!

강사 첨삭

Hello again [이름]!

I miss talking to you. ^^ Hihihihi!

Oh! I am sure that you can handle all of those tasks that you mentioned below.

I believe in your abilities. I know you can.
Good luck on your presentation. ^^

Teacher Nina


1.Suporn is extremely ____ about going to Kyoto.
a.excited

>> correct
2.She ___ me a pencil yesterday.
a.lent

>> correct 
3.Elin has always been an ___ person.
a.independent

>> correct
4.The child\'s tooth is ___.
b.loose

>> correct
5.Mike was deeply ___ by the news of his mother\'s death.
b.affected

>> correct 

Hello teacher long time no talk~!

>> correct 

>> OR: Hello teacher, long time no talk.
You know that I have a specail task to do.

>> correct 
So I postphoned my class for 1 week.

>> So I postponed my class for one week.
Though busy days are over but there are lots of paperworks.

>> correct

>> OR: Though busy days are over, I still have a lot of paperwork to do.
and I am going to go business trip with my coworker tomorrow.

>> And I will go on a business trip with my co-worker tomorrow.

>> OR: I am going on a business trip with my co-worker tomorrow.
So I have to make the report of the result.

>> So have to make a report about the result.
then I have to go civil airport to see many thing including their personel system.

>> Then, I have to go to the civil airport to see many things including their personnel.
so that\'s why I postphoned my class.

>> So that\'s why I postponed my call.
Maybe, I have to prepare some kind of presentation.

>> Maybe, I have to prepare for a presentation.
Do you remember I had a presentation in front of many audiences last year?

>> Do you remember I had a presentation last year?
>> OR: Can you still remember that I had presented something in front of a lot of audience last year?

I have to do that again.

>> correct
Not only in my office but also I have lots of homework to do.

>> correct
yes, I will submit as many homework as I can.

>> correct
I hope I can handle all of these~!

>> correct

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