It's heavy snow~!!!

2011-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

oh..uh...again...no~~!!! I want no more heavy snow~~!! I started my car,Gaettong, by remote starter this morning. I had to scrapte snow from my car for ten minutes until my hands froze. And you never know this traffic congestion on snowy day. Gaettong crawled like a turtle. In addition, cars are getting dirty after heavy snow because of snow removal meterials. But you know just seeing snow does not bother me specially when I am sipping a cup of coffee. I didn't drink a drop of coffee all weekend so I am glad to mee coffee a few minutes ago. Happy monday lei~~!

강사 첨삭

Hi J! Yeah I heard that there was heavy snowfall last weekend. So I am imagining how does it look like. Well enjoy your cup of coffee. Take care girl! Lei J   oh..uh...again...no~~!!! >>correct I want no more heavy snow~~!! >>correct >>I don't want it when it's snowing!! I started my car,Gaettong, by remote starter this morning. >>correct I had to scrapte snow from my car for ten minutes until my hands froze. >>I had to scrape the snow from my car for ten minutes until my hands are frozen. And you never know this traffic congestion on snowy day. >>correct Gaettong crawled like a turtle. >>correct In addition, cars are getting dirty after the heavy snow because of the snow removal meterials. >>correct But you know just seeing snow does not bother me specially when I am sipping a cup of coffee. >>correct I didn't drink a drop of coffee all weekend so I am glad to have coffee a few minutes ago. >>correct Happy monday lei~~! >>correct

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