It's heavy snow~!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
oh..uh...again...no~~!!!
I want no more heavy snow~~!!
I started my car,Gaettong, by remote starter this morning.
I had to scrapte snow from my car for ten minutes until my hands
froze.
And you never know this traffic congestion on snowy day.
Gaettong crawled like a turtle.
In addition, cars are getting dirty after heavy snow because of snow
removal meterials.
But you know just seeing snow does not bother me specially when I am
sipping a cup of coffee.
I didn't drink a drop of coffee all weekend so I am glad to mee coffee
a few minutes ago.
Happy monday lei~~!
강사 첨삭
Hi J! Yeah I heard that there was heavy snowfall last weekend. So I am imagining how does it look like. Well enjoy your cup of coffee. Take care girl!
Lei J
oh..uh...again...no~~!!!
>>correct
I want no more heavy snow~~!!
>>correct
>>I don't want it when it's snowing!!
I started my car,Gaettong, by remote starter this morning.
>>correct
I had to scrapte snow from my car for ten minutes until my hands froze.
>>I had to scrape the snow from my car for ten minutes until my hands are frozen.
And you never know this traffic congestion on snowy day.
>>correct
Gaettong crawled like a turtle.
>>correct
In addition, cars are getting dirty after the heavy snow because of the snow removal meterials.
>>correct
But you know just seeing snow does not bother me specially when I am sipping a cup of coffee.
>>correct
I didn't drink a drop of coffee all weekend so I am glad to have coffee a few minutes ago.
>>correct
Happy monday lei~~!
>>correct
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