It's interesting question that you have since I have learned english ever..

2018-10-11 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

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I learned play the violin when I was young. Long time passed ever since then. When I was in school I had to stopped playing the violin. After I graduate high school I started to playing the violin in the university. I am not a very skillful violinist. But I always try to play it well. Whenever I have a free time I play the violin. Thanks for asking. Your question makes me to play the violin more than now.

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I learned play the violin when I was young.

>> I learned playing the violin when I was young,


 Long time passed ever since then.

>> A long times has passed since then.


 When I was in school I had to stopped playing the violin.

>> When I was in school I had to stop playing the violin.


 After I graduate high school I started to playing the violin in the university.

>> I started playing the violin after I graduated from the University.


 I am not a very skillful violinist.

>> CORRECT


 But I always try to play it well. Whenever I have a free time I play the violin.

>> CORRECT


 Thanks for asking.

>> CORRECT


 Your question makes me to play the violin more than now.

>> CORRECT



Wow, I am glad to hear that ^^ I play the drums. So, whenever I feel stressed from work. I play the drums. please do the same too ^^

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