It's interesting question that you have since I have learned english ever..
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
I learned play the violin when I was young.
>> I learned playing the violin when I was young,
Long time passed ever since then.
>> A long times has passed since then.
When I was in school I had to stopped playing the violin.
>> When I was in school I had to stop playing the violin.
After I graduate high school I started to playing the violin in the university.
>> I started playing the violin after I graduated from the University.
I am not a very skillful violinist.
>> CORRECT
But I always try to play it well. Whenever I have a free time I play the violin.
>> CORRECT
Thanks for asking.
>> CORRECT
Your question makes me to play the violin more than now.
>> CORRECT
Wow, I am glad to hear that ^^ I play the drums. So, whenever I feel stressed from work. I play the drums. please do the same too ^^
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