It's me again.

2014-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

It's me again teacher! I'm really sad because [이름] is too busy with at work. So, I'll do the homework intead of [이름] again^^ After that! I want to talk to you about my exam! I'll have to take two other exam. The first is the Physical fitness test. There are three type of fitness test. Sit-up, push-up and 3KM running. Not bad others, but 3KM running is my weakness! I must come to 3KM in 15 minutes.... It's really hard and breathless. The second is the TOEIC test. As you konw..I'm not good at English:-( TOEIC is too arduouse for me. But [이름] is good at running and TOEIC test!!!! He isn't even exam target!!!! So provoke. But I love [이름] ^^ Good night!

강사 첨삭

Hi Carolyn! Thank you for sending another composition. I am happy because I can see your effort. Oh! Think positive, don\'t think that you are not good. Just give your best shot always and be positive in everything you do. I will be glad to help you out with your TOEIC exam.^^You are good, don\'t give up, okay? Good night. I hope to hear from you soon.  Teacher Nina   It\'s me again teacher! >> Correct!I\'m really sad because [이름] is too busy with at work. >> I\'m really sad because [이름] is too busy with work. So, I\'ll do the homework intead of [이름] again^^ >> Correct! ( Spelling check: instead ^^) After that! I want to talk to you about my exam! >> Correct!I\'ll have to take two other exam. >> I\'ll have to take two other exams. The first is the Physical fitness test. >> Correct!There are three type of fitness test. >> Correct!Sit-up, push-up and 3KM running. >> Correct!>> OR: Sit up, push up and 3 kilometers run. Not bad others, but 3KM running is my weakness! >> The others arenot bad, but with 3 km. running is my weakness. I must come to 3KM in 15 minutes.... >> I must reach 3 km. in fifteen minutes. It\'s really hard and breathless. >> It\'s really hard and breath-taking.The second is the TOEIC test. >> Correct >> OR: The second test is TOEIC. As you konw..I\'m not good at English:-( >> As you know, I\'m not good at English. TOEIC is too arduouse for me. >> TOEIC is too arduous for me. ( Spelling check: arduous ^^) But [이름] is good at running and TOEIC test!!!! >> CorrectHe isn\'t even exam target!!!! So provoke. >> Did you mean: He didn\'t even get the exam target, so provoking. But I love [이름] ^^ >> CorrectGood night! >> Correct 

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