It's me again.
학생이 쓴 원문
It's me again teacher!
I'm really sad because [이름] is too busy with at work.
So, I'll do the homework intead of [이름] again^^
After that! I want to talk to you about my exam!
I'll have to take two other exam.
The first is the Physical fitness test.
There are three type of fitness test.
Sit-up, push-up and 3KM running.
Not bad others, but 3KM running is my weakness!
I must come to 3KM in 15 minutes....
It's really hard and breathless.
The second is the TOEIC test.
As you konw..I'm not good at English:-(
TOEIC is too arduouse for me.
But [이름] is good at running and TOEIC test!!!!
He isn't even exam target!!!! So provoke.
But I love [이름] ^^
Good night!
강사 첨삭
Hi Carolyn!
Thank you for sending another composition.
I am happy because I can see your effort.
Oh! Think positive, don\'t think that you are not good.
Just give your best shot always and be positive in everything you do.
I will be glad to help you out with your TOEIC exam.^^You are good, don\'t give up, okay?
Good night. I hope to hear from you soon.
Teacher Nina
It\'s me again teacher!
>> Correct!I\'m really sad because [이름] is too busy with at work.
>> I\'m really sad because [이름] is too busy with work. So, I\'ll do the homework intead of [이름] again^^
>> Correct! ( Spelling check: instead ^^) After that! I want to talk to you about my exam!
>> Correct!I\'ll have to take two other exam.
>> I\'ll have to take two other exams. The first is the Physical fitness test.
>> Correct!There are three type of fitness test.
>> Correct!Sit-up, push-up and 3KM running.
>> Correct!>> OR: Sit up, push up and 3 kilometers run. Not bad others, but 3KM running is my weakness!
>> The others arenot bad, but with 3 km. running is my weakness. I must come to 3KM in 15 minutes....
>> I must reach 3 km. in fifteen minutes. It\'s really hard and breathless.
>> It\'s really hard and breath-taking.The second is the TOEIC test.
>> Correct
>> OR: The second test is TOEIC. As you konw..I\'m not good at English:-(
>> As you know, I\'m not good at English.
TOEIC is too arduouse for me.
>> TOEIC is too arduous for me. ( Spelling check: arduous ^^) But [이름] is good at running and TOEIC test!!!!
>> CorrectHe isn\'t even exam target!!!! So provoke.
>> Did you mean: He didn\'t even get the exam target, so provoking.
But I love [이름] ^^
>> CorrectGood night!
>> Correct
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