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Hi~ Kelly! I tried to review about today's class so, I heard today's record. I felt shame and I realized my poor English skills. I appriciate that you have persevering for me. I'm going to write the music that I like again because I'd like to ruminate on last class. I revised my composition a little. Here are my answer about my favorite music. I enjoy listening to diverse music like pop, hippop, newage. I especially like up-tempo music. Whenever I hear that, I feel excited. I sometimes do dancing with up-tempo music at home. It makes me happy. I don't have a favorite musician but a lot of favorite music. I recently listen to a song "I'm yours". This song is very sweet. I don't like heave metal music because I'm a bit scared when I listen to that music and is very noisy.

Hi [이름],

Thank you for dropping in this composition. I think you have an interesting choice of music. Anyway I뭠l catch you later. Take care!

-T. Venus

Hi~ Kelly!

>>Hi Kelly!
I tried to review about today's class so, I heard today's record.

>>I tried to review about today뭩 class, so I listened to today뭩 record.
I felt shame and I realized my poor English skills.

>>I felt ashamed and I realized how poor my English skills were.
I appriciate that you have persevering for me.

>>I appreciate that you have persevered with me.
I'm going to write the music that I like again because I'd like to ruminate on last class.

>>I