It's me. Lei!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Lei! Good afternoon.
Today is cloudy and raining in Korea.
While I slept, it looked like raining.
How is the weather over there?
Umm.. Spring will come soon.
Ah! My sister started Power English from yesterday.
She does her class for 20 minute at evrey night.
Her English skills are better than my skills.
Anyway, most importantly, I recommended Power English to her.
I always appriciate that you listen to my story.
You are a good listener. thank you.
Have a great day and enjoy your lunch.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I have no problems listening to your stories because they are interesting. I didn't know that you recommended our company to your sister. You know what, you can inform our managers about so that you can have supplementary classes. Thank you [이름] for making me smile. Take care!!!Lei J
Hi Lei! Good afternoon.
>>correct
Today is cloudy and raining in Korea.
>>correct
While I slept, it looked like raining.
>>It looked like it rained while I was sleeping.
How is the weather over there?
>>correct
>>How's the weather in your country/location? (alternative)
Umm.. Spring will come soon.
>>correct
>>Spring season is fast approaching.
Ah! My sister started Power English from yesterday.
>>Ah! My sister started her lessons at Power English yesterday.
She does her class for 20 minute at evrey night.
>>She is having her classes every night for 20 minutes.
Her English skills are better than my skills.
>>correct
Anyway, most importantly, I recommended Power English to her.
>>correct
I always appriciate that you listen to my story.
>>I always appreciate that you listen to my story.
You are a good listener.
>>correct
thank you.
>>correct
Have a great day and enjoy your lunch.
>>correct
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