It's my homework.

2013-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

I didn't konw about homework that I should write in this page. So I didn't write homework last time. Why do you think some people take on something ephemeral? I think it depands on something, something what? If something is epheral dog, some people should take on the dog. Because It's responsible for taking care the dog. But if something is ephemeral home appliances, I think it doesn't need to take on it. Because it doesn't matter nothing. So i think it depands on something. I don't know about understading this question whether correct or not. Anyway i look forward to meetting you tommorrow. Because i don't meet you for 3 days. i went to visit some place with my husband's mother for 2 days. so i can't attend a class. See you tommorrow.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, Judy!
I bet you had a great time with your mother-in-law.

Our stay here n land sure is ephemeral so we should make use of our time to the fullest

and spending some with our loved ones is simply one of the best ways to do it.

I am so happy for you, Judy.

At least you had the chance to really have a bonding experience with your mother-in-law.

Now, for my comment on your homework,

I do think that you were able to get the point of the question.

In fact, I truly admire your answer.

It does depend on what that \"something\" is.

You have brilliant thoughts and so, what we have to work on is how we put them in words.

That is why I will have to ask you to go over the modifications that I made below so that you will be guided in your next composition.

Thank you so much, Judy!

It is already February...

Chinese New Year is just around the corner

_Teacher Klein

I didn\'t konw about homework that I should write in this page.

>>I didn\'t know that I should write my homework on this page.
So I didn\'t write homework last time.
>>That is why I didn\'t write my homework last time.
Why do you think some people take on something ephemeral?
I think it depands on something, something what?

>>I think it depends on what that something is.
If something is epheral dog, some people should take on the dog. Because It\'s responsible for taking care the dog.

>>If that something has to do with taking care of a pet like a dog,

some people take on it because they think that they are responsible for the dog even if it is only ephemeral.
But if something is ephemeral home appliances, I think it doesn\'t need to take on it. Because it doesn\'t matter nothing.

>>But is that something is an ephemeral home appliance, I think we don\'t need to take on it because it doesn\'t matter.
So i think it depands on something.
>>So I think it depends on what that something is.
I don\'t know about understading this question whether correct or not.

>>I don\'t know if how I understood this question is whether correct or not.

>>I am not sure if how I understood this question is right or wrong.
Anyway i look forward to meetting you tommorrow.

>>Anyway, I look forward to meeting you tomorrow. [spelling check]
Because i don\'t meet you for 3 days.

>>This is because I didn\'t meet you for three days.

i went to visit some place with my husband\'s mother for 2 days. so i can\'t attend a class.

>>I went to visit some places with my husband\'s mother for two days, so I was unable to attend our classes.

>>I went to visit some places with my mother-in-law for two days, so I was unable to attend our classes.
See you tommorrow.

>>See you tomorrow!

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