It’s natural!
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s natural. Because in Korea, there is a culture of taking off shoes indoors. Because we have something called Ondol. Ondol is to warm the floor of a room. Since it has been established since ancient times that people lie down or sit down in a warm room using Ondol, the traditional Korean method, the floor to lie on must be clean. So it makes sense that I should take off my shoes at home.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
It\'s natural. Because in Korea, there is a culture of taking off shoes indoors.
>>> CORRECT!
Because we have something called Ondol.
>>> CORRECT!
Ondol is to warm the floor of a room.
>>> CORRECT!
Since it has been established since ancient times that people lie down or sit down in a warm room using Ondol, the traditional Korean method, the floor to lie on must be clean.
>>> CORRECT!
So it makes sense that I should take off my shoes at home.
>>> CORRECT!
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