It\'s nonsense
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it\'s nonsense.
Age is not important to right thinking.
The world is wide and there are so many crazy people.
Every people they does mistake and hurts somebody.
There\'s no guarantee that older person won\'t make a mistake.
And I saw very many time older than me but wierd person.
I like just normal and nicely person :)
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
That\'s true. Every person makes mistakes. Humans are not perfect regardless is you are older or younger so we have to respect each other equally.
I think it\'s nonsense.
Every people they does mistake and hurts somebody.
There\'s no guarantee that older person won\'t make a mistake.
And I saw very many time older than me but wierd person.
I like just normal and nicely person :)
> CORRECT
Age is not important to right thinking.
>> Age does not define that you are always right.
The world is wide and there are so many crazy people.
>> The world is big and there are so many crazy people.
Every people they does mistake and hurts somebody.
>> Every person makes mistakes and hurt other people.
There\'s no guarantee that older person won\'t make a mistake.
>> There\'s no guarantee that older people don\'t make mistakes.
And I saw very many time older than me but wierd person.
>> I\'ve seen older people make more mistakes than me.
I like just normal and nicely person :)
>> I just act normal and nice when that happens.
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