it\'s only natural that an excellent coach from another country coaches the national team of our cou

2022-12-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Teacher, if you don\'t mind, it would be nice to have time for me to briefly present the contents of the discussion during today\'s class. I\'m going to do a presentation practice. Historically, Korea has been a nation that has relatively little interaction with foreigners compared to other countries. Each country or people tends to value their own things. So even in sports, we thought it was right for our own people to coach our national team. Recently, everything is going international. And it is true that there is a limit to development without internationalization. So I think it\'s only natural that an excellent coach from another country coaches the national team of our country.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Elliot. No, I don\'t mind at all. We definitely can make time for your presentation practice. Thank you for letting me know in advance. By the way, good job on the homework. Keep it up! ^^ ~Jane c\",) 


Historically, Korea has been a nation that has relatively little interaction with foreigners compared to other countries. 
>> CORRECT =) 

Each country or people tends to value their own things.
>> CORRECT =) 

So even in sports, we thought it was right for our own people to coach our national team. 
>> CORRECT =) 

Recently, everything is going international. 
>> CORRECT =) 

And it is true that there is a limit to development without internationalization. 
>> CORRECT =) 

So I think it\'s only natural that an excellent coach from another country coaches the national team of our country. 
>> CORRECT =) 

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