It's rather an ambiguous question.

2018-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

As well known industry boss is not me. I make an living like anyone else as it was ordinary life. Thanks for asking me that sort of question when I am idle. Today is the day of the initail day of my country's law so I flaged the national flag of korea in the veranda. It is getting hotter everyday I feel the real heat of summer. I want to eat chicken soup for health helping. Have a healtier life in thesedays. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^


Thank you for sending your homework.


Cheers!
Jean



As well known industry boss is not me.

>> I\'m not a boss in a big company.


 I make an living like anyone else as it was ordinary life.

>> I make a living like anyone les as I like an ordinary life.


 Thanks for asking me that sort of question when I am idle.

>> correct


 Today is the day of the initail day of my country\'s law so I flaged the national flag of korea in the veranda.

>> Today is the anniversary of the declaration of our Constitution so I put our flag out on the veranda.


 It is getting hotter everyday I feel the real heat of summer.

>> It is getting hotter every day. I feel the real heat of summer.


 I want to eat chicken soup for health helping.

>> I want to eat chicken soup to improve my health.


 Have a healtier life in thesedays.

>> I want to live a healthier life these days.

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