It's rather an ambiguous question.
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Hello!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
As well known industry boss is not me.
>> I\'m not a boss in a big company.
I make an living like anyone else as it was ordinary life.
>> I make a living like anyone les as I like an ordinary life.
Thanks for asking me that sort of question when I am idle.
>> correct
Today is the day of the initail day of my country\'s law so I flaged the national flag of korea in the veranda.
>> Today is the anniversary of the declaration of our Constitution so I put our flag out on the veranda.
It is getting hotter everyday I feel the real heat of summer.
>> It is getting hotter every day. I feel the real heat of summer.
I want to eat chicken soup for health helping.
>> I want to eat chicken soup to improve my health.
Have a healtier life in thesedays.
>> I want to live a healthier life these days.
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