It's too heard to listening

2011-06-23 · 첨삭 강사 Razel

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I was going home too late. It was very surprised. can't rest. do the call phone now. but it was not easy to heard is very terrible. my teacher call me at 4th times. i was do just like that But lately heard sound are being good!!!,=. i was very relief..

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for the compostion. I enjoyed reading and correcting it. Here are my corrections that would be of great help. Thank you:) It's too heard to listening. >> It's too hard to listen.  I was going home too late. >> I went home late. It was very surprised. >> I was so surprised. can't rest. >> Surprised, that even I went home late, I can't take a rest yet. do the call phone now.but it was not easy to heard is very terrible.>> Then I received a phone call, but I had a hard time hearing it because of its terrible sound.my teacher call me at 4th times. >> The call was from my teacher who had been calling me for four times already.i was do just like that >> The terrible sound lasted for a moment. But lately heard sound are being good!!!,=. >> But after some minutes, everything went well. i was very relief.. >> I felt relief.    or you can also say: >> I was relieved.

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