It's tuesday.

2011-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

학생이 쓴 원문

Today is like thursday. Maybe I may hope friday fast come. In the winter, I feel easy tired because It's cold. 1. Glittering The glasses are glittering by the sunlight. 2. Greedy Almost old people have greedy for much long time life. 3. Prank I was playing prank on her like a koala. 4. Doubt When I entered and exited, there isn't my umbrella. so I doubted all people were hanging on the same shape umbrella. 5. Occurred Because He did not full power, the result of losing is occurred.

강사 첨삭

Happy Tuesday! I hope you have a great time in class. I feel great. There are no mistakes that you\'ve made, but continue reviewing you notes. You've been great. I hope you continue sending your compositions and homework for me to check, I enjoy helping you check your homework.  I enjoyed checking your composition. Teacher Faye Today is like thursday. >> Today is like Thursday. >>(OR) Today is like Tuesday. Maybe I may hope friday fast come. >>I hope Friday comes fast.In the winter, I feel easy tired because It\'s cold. >> During winter, I feel easily tired because It\'s cold. 1. GlitteringThe glasses are glittering by the sunlight. >> The glasses glitters at the sunlight. 2. GreedyAlmost old people have greedy for much long time life. >> Almost old people are greedy for much longer life. 3. PrankI was playing prank on her like a koala. >>CORRECT4. DoubtWhen I entered and exited, there isn\'t my umbrella. >>When I entered and exited, my umbrella isn't there.so I doubted all people were hanging on the same shape umbrella. >> So I doubted all people were hanging on the same shape umbrella. 5. OccurredBecause He did not full power, the result of losing is occurred. >> Because he did not give the fullest, the result of losing occurred.

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