It seeme like a family birthday party.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello. teacher~~
It is rained again today. There are many flooding places. There were many accidents.
We are sacry, But We\'ll overcome it. Than you for your concern.
It seeme like a family birthday party. Looks very happy.
There is a women in the middle who is the birthday girl.
She is holding a cake and smiling broadly.
On either side, her cute daughters are looking and smiling.
Behind her looks like a husband.
My husband is putting his arms around mom and dad.
and he looks really close.
The white cake is unique. I thnink the mother made it is for her daughter.
Looking at this picture, it seems like a very happy family
강사 첨삭
Hi, Soolyn! Try to avoid the flooded areas and do not walk on the streets if there are still water. Take care!
-Faith-
Hello. teacher~~>> Hello, teacher!~~
It is rained again today.
It is rained again today.
>> It rains again today.
There are many flooding places. There were many accidents.
>> There are many flooded places and accidents.
We are sacry, But We\'ll overcome it.
>> We are scared, but we will overcome it.
Than you for your concern.
>> Thank you for your concern.
It seeme like a family birthday party. Looks very happy.
>> Thank you for your concern.
It seeme like a family birthday party. Looks very happy.
>> It seems that a family birthday party is enjoyable or fun.
There is a women in the middle who is the birthday girl.
There is a women in the middle who is the birthday girl.
>> The woman in the middle is the birthday girl.
She is holding a cake and smiling broadly.
She is holding a cake and smiling broadly.
>> CORRECT
On either side, her cute daughters are looking and smiling.
On either side, her cute daughters are looking and smiling.
>> On both sides are her cute daughters, looking and smiling at her.
Behind her looks like a husband.
>> The man behind her looks like her husband.
My husband is putting his arms around mom and dad.
and he looks really close.
My husband is putting his arms around mom and dad.
and he looks really close.
>> Her husband puts his arms around his mother and father and he looks really close with them.
The white cake is unique.
The white cake is unique.
>> CORRECT
I thnink the mother made it is for her daughter.
>> I think the mother made it for her daughter.
Looking at this picture, it seems like a very happy family
>> I think the mother made it for her daughter.
Looking at this picture, it seems like a very happy family
>> By looking at this picture, it seems like they are a very happy family.
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